Break Blogpost #2

    1. The student should not have plagiarized in the first place. They should have cited and quoted the plagiarized material and elaborated on it. They also could have put it their own words or summarized it.

   2."There is a peaceful essence flowing from the structures. Perhaps the cool dark colors and the fiery windows spark memories of our own warm childhood years filled with imagination of what exists in the night and dark starry skies. The center point of the town is the tall steeple of the church, reigning largely over the smaller buildings. This steeple casts down a sense of stability onto the town, and also creates a sense of size and seclusion.To the left of the painting there is a massive dark structure that develops an even greater sense of size and isolation." (vangoughgallery.com) I found this and thought it was the perfect way of describing the painting. 

     That would have been a better way to incorporate it into the response. 

3.   #1: Cite your source. 

      #2: Put it into your own words. 

      #3: Summarize.