One of the most beloved in her life ever
You left an empty feeling in her heart
You had something they never could sever
You melted away and now you’re apart
She watched you go through all the tough harsh pain
But she couldn’t do a thing to help you
She thinks about it again and again
She’s awfully scared and knows not what to do
The little girl you taught so many things
She’s lost and only memories can help
Ever since those last lonely nights of spring
With all her desperate cries, screams, and yelps
And maybe soon she will finally dream
Then forget her troubles and childhood screams
you had done an outstanding job in empthasing the meaning on the sonnet.You had really show how the little girl was left apart because of something ahw couldn't fix. Even though,it took me some time to understand the sonnet I noticed what you was trying to say.
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